So,without further ado. Here is my first story I'm posting up called, The Red Man.
Have you ever heard of him?
He has
many names.
The Red
Man, the Man in Red, the Blood Man, the Man in Blood…
They
say once you dream of the blood at night and see the red in day, you’re marked
Once
you think of the Red Man, the Man in Red, the Blood Man, the Man in Blood,
you’re plagued
But
once you hear the Mourning Whispers, you’re the Red Man’s next victim
But
once you see the Red Man, The Man in Red, The Blood Man, the Man in Blood, your
life has already ended.
It occurred to me that I
instantly knew I wanted to be like my father, because when I was nine, I saw my
first ghost.
My
father and I were raking leaves in the cemetery where he’d worked for years as
the caretaker. It was late autumn, just in time to bring out the sweaters and
heavy coats for Winter, but on that particular evening, there was a noticeable
bite to the air as the sun dipped beyond the horizon. A mild breeze carried the
scent of murky, wet earth, and as the wind picked up, fallen leaves twirled in
the air. A flock of birds took flight from the treetops and glided like a dark
storm cloud across the pale blue sky.
I put a
hand over my eyes to watch them. When my gaze dropped, a freezing chill
engulfed me. I saw him in the distance. He stood underneath the dying, dropping
branches of the oak tree, lurking in the shadows. The gold light slipped
through the tress, casting a glow on the space around him. I wondered for a
moment if he was a mere figment of my imagination. The gold light started to
fade, he became more defined, and his features were slightly visible. He was
old, even more old than Papa, with light colorless hair, brushing the
collar of his dark suit coat. He had light colorless eyes that seem to burn
with an inner flame.
Papa was
bent to his work as the rake moved steadily over the leaves, he said under his
breath, “Don’t look at him.”
I turn
in surprise and blink. “You see him,
too?”
“Yes, I
see him. Get back to work, please.”
“But who
is-“
“I said
don’t look at him!”
His raised tone stunned me. I could count on one hand the
number of times he’d ever raised his voice at me. Now that he done so, without
provocation, made me instantly tear up.
“Theo…”
There
was regret in his voice and what later to come to realize, was pity in his
eyes.
“I’m
sorry, Theo. I didn’t mean to make you
upset, but its important that you do as I say. You mustn’t look at him,” he
said in a softer tone. “any of them.”
“Is he
a-“
“Yes.”
Cold heaviness bites the atmosphere, and I saw my white
breath puff into the air before evaporating. Something was lurking close and
the coldness touched my back, and it was all I could do to keep my gaze
trained on the ground and not at what stood behind me.
“Papa,”
I whispered. I always called him this. He always seemed very old to me, even
though he was not yet fifty. For as long as I can remember, his face had been
heavily lined and weathered, like dried cracked mud, and his shoulders drooped
from years of bending over graves.
I loved
him with every fiber of my nine-year old being. He and Momma were my whole
world. Or had been until that moment.
I saw
something shift in Papa’s face and then his eyes slowly closed briefly. He laid
aside our rakes and placed his hand on the top of my head.
“Let’s
rest for a moment,” he said with a sigh.
We sat
on the ground, our backs to the ghost as we watched the setting sun. The
remaining light was still warm on my face, even though I couldn’t stop
shivering.
“Who is
he?” I finally whisper, unable to bear the silence any longer.
“I don’t
know.”
“Why can’t
I look at him?”
“You
don’t want him to know that you can see him?”
“Why
not?” I picked up a twig and poked it through a dead leaf, spinning it like a
pinwheel between my fingers. “Why not, Papa?”
“It’s
because what they want more out of anything else is to be apart of our living
world again. They’re like parasites; drawn to our energy, feeding off our
warmth and life. The dead is dangerous, Theo. If they know you can see them,
they’ll cling to you like blood-thirsty leeches. They'll haunt you forever.”
I didn’t
know if I completely understand what he told me, but the idea of being
haunted both terrified and thrilled me.
“Not
everyone can see them,” he continued “for those of us who can, there are
certain precautions we must take in order to protect ourselves and those around
is. Don’t look at them, don’t speak and don’t let them sense your frear. Even
when they touch you.”
A chill
climbed over me. “They touch you?”
“Sometimes
they do. Some more than others, yes.”
“And you
can feel it?”
He drew
in a breath. “Yes. You can feel it, and it’s painful. Don’t ever let them touch
you, understand?”
I threw
the stick away and pulled up my knees, wrapping my arms tightly around them.
Somehow, even in my young age, I was calm on the outside. But my insides were
filling with dread.
Silence
once again found its way between us, except the bristling of dying leaves
around us. Papa’s voice finally broke the silence, startling me to have his
attention. “You should always keep your distance from those who are Haunted and
Possessed.”
“Possessed?”
I perk. “Like…demons? They actually exist?”
“Yes.
They really exist. But its important for you to know that if they seek you out,
turn away from them for they constitute a terrible threat and cannot be
trusted. But its getting late. We should probably head home before your Mother
starts to worry.”
“Can
Momma see them?”
“Yes.
But you cannot tell her that you can.”
“Why
not?”
“We want
you to have a normal childhood as possible. It’s too dangerous, especially if
you’re with us. But this has to be our secret, just between you and me. When
you’re older, you’ll understand. For now, just do your best to follow the rules
I told you and everything will be fine. Can you do that?”
“Yes, Papa.”
But even as I promised, it was all I could do to keep glancing over my
shoulder.
The
breeze picked up and the chill deepened inside me. Somehow, without turning,
the old ghost had drifted closer. Papa knew it, too. I could feel the tension
as he murmured, “Just remembered what I told you.”
“I will,
Papa.”
The
ghost’s frigid breath feathered down my back of my neck and the pungent odor of
murky swamp water and decay filled my senses. I closed a hand over my nose and
mouth and started to tremble. I couldn’t help myself.
“Cold?”
my father asked in his normal breath. He wasn’t concealing his noses like I
was. He was probably use to the stinky smell. “Well, it’s getting to be that
time of the year. Summer can’t last forever.”
Papa
pulled me to my feet with him. The ghost skittered away even further, then
slowly floated back.
“We
should be getting home. Your mother is cooking a mess of lasagna tonight.” He picked
up the rakes and hoisted them over his shoulder.
“And
corn potato chowder?” I ask, though my choice was hardly louder than a whisper.
“I
expect so. Come on, I want to show you the work of the gravestones in the cold
cemetery. I know how you love the angels.”
He took
my hand and squeezed my fingers in reassurance. The ghost followed, unable to
get any closer than a foot. By the time we reached the old section, Papa had
already pulled the key from his pocket. But something else caught my attention.
It appeared to be a simple knife with a glowing blue crystal jewel embedded in
the butt of the black handle followed by four crafted finger groves. The blade
was sheathed in a black leather case that hung loosely against his hip. I could
feel slow, vibrating pulses coming from the knife.
I reach
out to touch it and the glowing blue crystal, but Papa’s hands restricted me
from doing so.
“Don’t
touch it,” he says, a hint of warning in his tone.
“Why
not? What is it?” It was obviously a knife, but from the slow, vibrating pulses
and glowing blue gem, it was something else, too.
“You see
how it’s glowing? Whenever there is a
good ghost, the crystal will turn blue, and if there’s a bad ghost, it turns
red. And, it’s protecting us.”
I tilt my head and squint. “How?”
“That
ghost isn’t getting any closer to us because the knife is making them stay
away.”
I stare
at the knife as Papa turn the lock and the heavy iron gate creakily swung open.
We
stepped through the cemetery and suddenly I wasn’t afraid anymore. My newfound
courage emboldens me. I pretended to trip and when I bent to tie my shoe laces,
I glanced back. The old ghost hovered a few feet away. It was obvious he was
unable to advance any closer, and I couldn’t help but give a childish smirk.
When I
straightened, I glanced up at Papa.
“I want
to be ghost-hunter, Papa. Just like you. Will you teach me?”
Papa
looked down at me, kindness returned in his brown eyes, laughing as he ruffled
my hair. “We’ll see."
As the childhood memory
faded away, I found it hard to concentrate while driving because the woman in
the passenger seat kept staring at me. I immediately knew what I got myself
into as soon as I picked her up. The phrase of “Beware the hitchhiker!” flashed
through my mind as I did so. The thing is about this little situation was that
she wasn’t a hitchhiker. Well, not an ordinary one, anyway.
The
dripping, pale colorless hair was the dead giveaway, and so were the tendrils
of black veins pulsing slowly across her blue-white skin. Shiny black eyes of
tar. And the way the occasional shiver and twitches would occur in her neck,
hands and feet. She looked as if she was having a seizure.
The
woman is mostly seen wondering the Metal Mill Bridge, surrounded by shallow river
water, a never-ending highway, and a whole lot of trees. Unsuspecting drivers
probably pick her up out of pity, worry, and curiosity, thinking she is lost
and in need help.
“My
child is in severe danger, you must help me!” she said with desperation in her
voice, like she was going to fail on helping her endangered child if we didn’t
get there soon. The soft drip, drip gets
to me, and I glance over to see that there was a small puddle of water
expanding beneath of her bare, pale feet. Not only was that but the seat she
was sitting in was getting soaked. And this isn’t even my car!
“I will
help you, “I say as calm as possible.
“You
must hurry, please!” she says, her voice heightening an octave.
It was then when I felt it.
I always felt it; the soft hum and dull, throbbing vibrating sensation against
my right leg. Taking a swift glance down, the outline was a slow pulsing bright
blue of my spiked Bowie knife. It was telling me that the woman beside me was a
harmless one, but knowing from experience, that can change at any moment if she
decides to attack.
“I will help you as much as
I can,” I tell her, glancing at the water-dripping woman who resumed staring at
me. Once again, the silence became eerie. A slow curve was taken around the
corner of the dark, somewhat haunting highway. I let my foot slowly ease off
the gas. The Metal Mill Bridge was just five miles ahead. “Just taking safety precautions,” I said
aloud, as if I had to force the words out. “Driving at night is dangerous, who
know what might run across the road or...jump off it...”
I realized that I shouldn’t have said that. At any moment now, she would try to exit the car and disappear. Reappear and attack. Ghosts were pretty sneaky like that. Before that happens, I had to find a way to kill the poor woman. But she was already dead. I went past the speed limit of thirty, killing the speedometer over fifty—too fast for her to consider of jumping out and disappearing, but with whatever ghosts do, you can never be too sure.
Working fast, I reached down
to take my blade out from under the leg of my jeans, the blade pulsing
welcomingly in my hand, and that’s when I see the familiar outline of the Metal
Mill Bridge. Right on cue, the woman shrieks and lunges for the steering wheel,
jerking it to the right. I jerk it back straight and fumble to slam my foot on
the break. The sound of rubber burning against asphalt stings my ears, and out
of the corner of my eye I see that the woman’s face was changing, and at the
same time, so was the pulse and heat of my blade.
Dripping, colorless hair wet
hair began to rain black water. Her oil eyes, skull and face were embedded with
sharp, jagged rocks and pebbles. Filling up with a darker substance, running
thick, slow and black from the openings of her mouth, nose, eyes, and ears like
black sludge. The black veins expanded, growing thicker, darker, and pulsing
erratically.....
Hello Brittney, the story about Red Man was fictional right? I could relate it to my life it looked so real to me. I liked it. Keep on sharing the stories like these. It is a good way to get rid of the tension of my work by keeping myself busy in interesting things like this.
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Arnold Brame
Fire Safety Risk Assessment